Sunday, 13 November 2011

CF Feedback - planning

Kitty / Beccy - L4+
Well done - outstanding research into products on the blog, underpinned by critical theory. You choose relevant, challenging texts and make direct links from these research processes to your own concept development. Make sure for print ad analysis you reference in which publication the ad appeared; you will have to decide that for your own campaign.

Also - ensure that where possible video is embedded in post - Kitty your own footage from a shoot is as a link, but link doesn't work.

In terms of production, this is a clear record of your contribution to both shooting, logistical planning and amendments to the concept. It would be useful to have photographs from the shoots on the blog too or stills from footage to illustrate technical issues encountered and shot ideas. For A* evaluation you will need this detail and it is worth gathering the information while it is fresh in your mind.

You now need to ensure that you document the editing process too - from animatic to rough cut. I'd like to see how you are organising it, what challenges you face and how you are going to construct your narrative. Screenshots would be useful here as a way of using ICT in presenting your work.

Lilli L1
Lilli, your contributions are still missing from the blog, despite our agreed list of posts. You also need to comment on the other posts to show that you are contributing. At the moment, you can only achieve a L1 for planning contributions.

In terms of production, I know that you have taken part in filming, however the evidence of this needs to be on the blog; you must reflect on the shoots and clearly state your roles. As you will be doing editing, attendance is vital, otherwise the other two will have to complete those tasks for you.

We would like to see you recover marks and take part in this exciting stage - it is now up to you to catch up.

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