In today's lesson, i responded to the feedback in which Ms Fernandez left after reviewing our footage so far. The main thing in which i changed was the saturation on most shots in order to make them feel like they match and create a sense of continuity. I also time stretched the fire engine with flashing lights shots to create a more dream like feel in contrast to it being to harsh before.
In order to complete our edit we need to...
- Look at the photograph shoot at the beginning, have we another CU of the artist to use.
- Review shot of artist looking up at the tree.
- Consider slowing the shot of kitty by the trees for a more dream like feel.
- Look at the RBG levels on the artist shots.
- Slow down running, cut with deer.
- Assess the fire extinguisher shot.
- Sync, ' don't you forget'
-Too many shoes - make kitty more dreamy.
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