B: Initial audience response from media students

The initial response given by the media class and teachers was very positive, here are some of the comments given...

- That we have succeeded in meeting our brief.
- The connotations of the girl hanging herself were done well as they were not to vivid.
- We created a video in which is conventional to the genre, the naturalistic shots such as the deer and trees were a main factor of this.
- The random shots juxtaposed to the female character worked really well.
- Strong British cultural codes were present meeting our target style of video.
- The audience understood the narrative of someone hanging themselves.
- Clearly identified the artist being the male character of the video.
- The video needs a focused viewing to get the storyline.
- We have used a variety of good shots.
- We have edited so that meaning is apparent.
- The mise en scene has been carefully considered.
- The most arresting shot in the video is the mask shot of the rabbit.

Things people would change

- Slow the female character shots down
- More dissolves to create a dreamy feel.